Sparkles
SparklesAre they reflective light on rippling watersor dancing fairies trailing silver dustacross the topaz bay? Do eager daughtersmaintain traditions mother sprites entrust?Each afternoon they leave...
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Sue that was enchanting, like reading a very beautiful fairy tale, told by fishermen no less!!! I've known some fishermen and the tales they tell, lol!! "the secret stash, where fairy dust is keptin...
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Lovely sonnet, Sue...warm with the sunlight on the waters, whimsical in tone, blending myths and legends with the tales of fisher-folk...and creating a magical image, and an open ended question... You...
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On "drink-in light" I don't think the dash is needed. This is gentle, with lovely images. Even the last two lines have a wink rather than a dismissive air, as we get to share the joke of the blindness...
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Doug, Paul, Davie, Michael and Kath...I want to thank each of you for taking the time to share your impressions. encourageing comments, all...great to know you enjoyed it.Michael...you're right, no...
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Sue, you know even if those fishermen were lying, I think my heart would tend to want to believe them. Love the playful undertone of this and the whimsical way it plays out.
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MERMAIDS!I could see a flip of glittering tails in this one...much enjoyed, and savored!
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Paul B and Gala...I very much appreciate your kind words.sue******************To have great poetry there must be great audiences, --Walt Whitman
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Lovely imagery. I saw a movie recently about fairies at the bottom of a garden. The fisherman reminded me of the two little girls in the movie who reported them. I enjoyed the awe and wonder.Suzanne
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As Gala said.MERMAIDS!Haha.Great sonnet here.Nicely penned.Loved this.Kudos dear friend.Yours with love,Alex
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Suzanne..I actually thought of that movie as I wrote this.thanx for sharing your impressions. Alex...thanks muchly for the kind comments. I'm very glad you like this one.Mermaids rarely enter the bay,...
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oops sorry, I double postedS******************To have great poetry there must be great audiences, --Walt Whitman
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Hi Heartsong7,I love the shimmering whimsy, the gossamer imagery that you have instilled in this poem. I admire how you have writ both lighter verse and verse of light with the self-same pen...
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I've had a heck of a time getting a post through lately. I wanted to at least thank you all for your thoughtful comments on this poem.thank you Dilvish and mirage and gala for the bump. I'm hoping...
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Sue, I love the sparkles on the water and I love tales of fairies, mermaids and other fancies. Now I will think of your fairies whenever I see "Sparkles". Thank you for this! Eva Olson - Imagination...
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Eva...what lovely comments. Thank you.Sue******************To have great poetry there must be great audiences, --Walt Whitman
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